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Nathan Turner, aged thirty, was a modest earner, if nothing other. Son of no

father and a flighty mother, and raised in most part by troubled brothers, he was never

one to put his trust in those upon whom the dust of age had scarcely settled. For a time,

he had meddled, even peddled, looking for the light in his own eyes. But never enough was

it, just as well, in his own mind, for the brand of fire which he desired was the sort a

man might chase until he dies, and even at the gates of Hell, never find.

But one cool evening in July, he chanced to meet - just walking by - a woman with

an empty stroller. "Empty stroller?" he asked at once, fearing himself a trifling dunce,

and followed quickly with, "Expecting children?"

In that moment, he wished she'd killed him.

"No," she said, smiling instead, "but I do so love collecting."

Then the dots Nathan Turner began connecting.

"Collecting? Whatever for? Though, your hobby I shan't and can't condemn, I'm more

used to the habits of my fellow men."

"Why, silly," she intoned, as the hum of life around her droned, "One day, I hope to fill them."

It was something in that thing she said. Something stirring and something

blurring emotions he'd long thought dead; Rosanna, that lovely woman, he did wed. And only

in their wedding bed, when their years together numbered seven, did he finally taste sweet

manna, rained down from the heavens. A simple test, one blue sign, was enough to utterly

realign a life started far too late. And on that date, after a lifetime's wait, he felt

twice the man, in the mirror, he was seeing.

For Elizabeth, his darling daughter, was well on her way to being.
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Sometimes, it's hard to tell what's real. This isn't much, but it's just enough, so as not to feel as though I'm losing touch with those who are watching. It has its place in a story near and very dear to my heart, but probably not the ones of which you're thinking. If you don't care, and you're looking to start, this piece, I'd say, is worth a reading.

Inspired by Poe's Raven, yes, it was, though I must say; once you begin, it's hard to keep from writing this way. Can I keep it up, a novel's length, or will I falter, day by day? In a scant few months, we'll see if I've the strength, or if this will end pushed to the side, way by way.

Enjoy!

(And no, the entire novel isn't going to be in this format. Only a very few chapters, representing the "real" world in which we live.)

Edit: Woke up at 4:30 in the morning to discover I'd received a DD. Slightly proud of myself doesn't even begin to cover it. Thank you so much, everyone. Shout out to the wonderful DA Lit community!
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:iconotrtavi:
Just simply beautiful. Just simply. Bravo.
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*SovereignSin Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*Takes a bow* :)

Thank you.
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:icondynamicability:
This is so beautiful and why Nathan's father is no longer... I think father was passed away
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*SovereignSin Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you thought my piece was beautiful. As for Nathan's Father... well... you might find out later what happened to him, when I get around to finishing my novel. :p
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~the-ketchup-kommando Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BEautiful piece of prose.
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*SovereignSin Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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~the-ketchup-kommando Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome, it was a pleasure. :)
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:iconnag72:
A gorgeous piece of writing that drew me in from the first sentence. Thanks for sharing.
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*SovereignSin Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for reading! :)
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:iconnag72:
It was a pleasure!
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